Jul 23 2008
First revision, deadline ticking
Finished the first revision pass, changing some things significantly and others not, and now it’s off at my writer’s group where I hope to get at least a few more opinions and comments before I have to tackle final revisions and sending it off. I like this one and had a lot of fun writing it, it’s been a challenge and an educational one. I’ve been working on the idea and the story since I first read about the anthology at the beginning of May, and seeing as how I did no writing at all in May, I don’t think I did too badly. Thanks to my first readers, Kit, Steve, and Jennifer, and any fellow Voluptuaries that want to help out!
I really liked your story. Way creepy, still.
But, I think you could make it even more creepy. Or, would you rather save the extreme creepy for your future serial killer novel?
I kinda think a bit of a warning for your future readers might be nice. I say creep it up!
Can you tell I like scary stories?