Comments on: At The Bar http://reesabrown.com/2010/02/18/at-the-bar/ the life and writerly times of Reesa Brown Mon, 21 May 2012 21:59:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Reesa http://reesabrown.com/2010/02/18/at-the-bar/#comment-668 Reesa Sat, 20 Feb 2010 08:42:26 +0000 http://reesabrown.com/?p=479#comment-668 @Derek - Hehe cutting it off when I did made sense for the "chapter", but was also convenient in that it delayed me having to make a really tough decision. I think we'll get to find out what's on the paper, even so. Glad you're enjoying it so far, I am too! Ambiguity is a fun thingy. Also, nonsensical sense. That's so cool you've been in a real-life version of The Bar! I love things like that, they always make me feel like I'm writing something fairly good if I'm mirroring slices of life. Sounds like a good adventure to experience! @Derek - Hehe cutting it off when I did made sense for the “chapter”, but was also convenient in that it delayed me having to make a really tough decision. I think we’ll get to find out what’s on the paper, even so.

Glad you’re enjoying it so far, I am too! Ambiguity is a fun thingy. Also, nonsensical sense.

That’s so cool you’ve been in a real-life version of The Bar! I love things like that, they always make me feel like I’m writing something fairly good if I’m mirroring slices of life. Sounds like a good adventure to experience!

]]> By: Derek http://reesabrown.com/2010/02/18/at-the-bar/#comment-664 Derek Fri, 19 Feb 2010 23:13:45 +0000 http://reesabrown.com/?p=479#comment-664 Yaaargh!! What did the paper say??!! hehe Excellent, creepy and surreal just as the previous ones have been. I liked the references to echoes and memories...seemed to shed a little light on exactly what is going on within this mind, dream, memory or alternate reality or whatever. =) Oh, funny thing too, I actually saw a real-life version of "The Bar". It was during one of my forays in Denver with my old roommate Jen, only this bar was simply called "Bar". LOL. We both noticed the flickering sign which caused us to laugh loudly and enticed us to check out what the inside was like. It was almost a mirror image of what you described in this story, except the bartender was male...but he was just as hollow and strange as Carrie in your story here. Yaaargh!! What did the paper say??!! hehe

Excellent, creepy and surreal just as the previous ones have been. I liked the references to echoes and memories…seemed to shed a little light on exactly what is going on within this mind, dream, memory or alternate reality or whatever. =)

Oh, funny thing too, I actually saw a real-life version of “The Bar”. It was during one of my forays in Denver with my old roommate Jen, only this bar was simply called “Bar”. LOL. We both noticed the flickering sign which caused us to laugh loudly and enticed us to check out what the inside was like. It was almost a mirror image of what you described in this story, except the bartender was male…but he was just as hollow and strange as Carrie in your story here.

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